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Comment on Impress Your Partner With a Simple Present by Hans

Hans — Fri, 21 May 2010 04:07:59 +0000

If your target audience is anyone other than art experts, this should be re-written in a way that everyone can understand and appreciate. While grammatically correct, that is not the problem here. It is as simple as knowing who your potential audience is, and who you want them to be. Exclude them and they will ignore your message.
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Comment on Flower Delivery UK by jwishz

jwishz — Fri, 21 May 2010 04:06:59 +0000

Yes, just don’t include you name on the card
You can say something like "secret admirer" or whatever is appropriate, or nothing
If not at home, flowers will be left with a neighbor
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Comment on Impress Your Partner With a Simple Present by Limerick

Limerick — Fri, 21 May 2010 04:05:59 +0000

Hi Paul,

Of course it can be written in a way that doesn’t require a reader to do mental gymnastics to try and comprehend the message it contains.

It is written in the jargon of Art Connoisseurs. It could well be written in a simplified manner that would convey ‘the information’ in a more palatable manner.

By the time one gets to the end of any of the sentences above, one has to do some head-scratching to discover the intent.
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Comment on Flower Delivery UK by Premier V

Premier V — Thu, 20 May 2010 23:04:31 +0000

When buying flowers online, Is it possible to stay anonymous and what if the person is not home?
Never bought flowers online before. I am going to use that major 1-800 place. I want to stay anonymous (not for any weird reason). Also, what happens if the person is not home at the time?

Comment on Impress Your Partner With a Simple Present by Paul

Paul — Thu, 20 May 2010 23:03:35 +0000

Can you understand what is being said here? Question for English teachers, students?
Can you understand what is trying to be said here? My business partner wants to use this description of an art show we have coming up. Is the concept of the show understandable from the following description? Even if it is, is it written properly? Can it be expressed in a simpler manner?

Curator’s Statement
“The scope of the exhibit includes perspectives on regionalism and generational conflict in Northeast Ohio as it relates to the changes in fine art appreciation. The intent is to push young fine artists to explore the true points of tension afflicting the sense of regional culture appreciating art as more than a purchased decorative piece or a symbol of educated society in a façade to impress peers with avant-garde tactics. The exhibit addresses the question “What’s [Your] Fine Art?”
This exhibit will be a Juried Artist Introduction styled show, presenting bodies of work from various artists living in the regional area who can relate to this notion of insufficient fine arts appreciation as identified through generational change of society. A core appeal of fine art is the artist’s ability to engage with all viewers through visual interpretation of a relative concept via their artistic perspective or approach. In relation to the ideals on regionalism and generational conflict, using fine art to connect these notions as well as demonstrate current perspectives is communicated by finely crafted, message-driven artwork that stimulates the psyche and senses of a viewer.”